My Writing Sample

This morning we all completed our first Writing Sample for 2013 I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes we were given,so the throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my learning goals from this soon. PICNIC AT PT ENGLAND BEACH As I arrived to school late I walked into class and everybody was sitting down as my teacher was marking the roll. When I walked into class she asked me if my mum was still coming with us to the beach but with a explanation I “,said, no sorry. After when my teacher finish the roll our whole class headed to the hall for a little assemble before we leave to the beach. After when Mr Burt was taking long with all his instructions and rules I started to have pins and needles going up my feet to my legs it felt really weird , it felt like someone was electrocuting me with a needal. After that my whole school headed towards the beach as the scenes leaded the little ones. As I still had my pins and needle going up my legs it started to die out . My legs were so exhausted that I couldn't even move. It was quite cold as the wind was moving through body , It was a really cloudy day. As we arrived to the beach everybody lined up in there class lines on the grass so our principal Mr Burt can talk to us again about what we should be doing and giving us some instructions. Then we went to seat out our tarpolin for us to have lunch on. Then me and my friends went to sit the on the chairs above the tarpolin and had lunch. Then we went down to the sand to play touch with my friends. After that me and my friends went up to the fields to play tag.